Crafting poems

Stuck on a poem or phrase? Want help? What are you waiting for?

This is what the *writing a poem* process looks like

Sometimes, when the stars align and everything is going perfectly...lol, just kidding, when does THAT ever happen? Pretty much never. 

That's why professional writers depend on processes to write on a regular basis. Maybe that looks like a routine (sitting at their desk from X:XX a.m. to X:XX p.m. or going for a walk, etc.), or a *do this, then that* meticulous kinda thing. 

Since poetry is my jam, that's what we're going to focus on now. 

That's also why we're taking a closer look at the process of writing poetry and what's involved.

Painting is poetry that is seen rather than felt, and poetry is painting that is felt rather than seen.

Leonardo da Vinci

On writing poetry

Tell your story. Don't try and tell the stories that other people can tell. Any starting writer starts out with other people's voices. But as quickly as you can start telling the stories that only you can tell, because there will always be better writers than you and there will always be smarter writers than you, but you are the only you.

Neil Gaiman

Step 1. Start writing

This process often involves automatic writing, or "word vomit" as a lot of people like to call it for some reason.

Even though it sounds easy peasy, there's a specific technique used to get your existing thoughts out on paper (the crinkle kind or digital). 

The guidelines involve writing for a certain period of time, working through your perfectionism and leaving all the misspellings and mistakes in - for now, and then carrying over the "gems" that are working. 

You'll end up leaving everything behind that isn't working, so you're starting with a better (but still terrible) first draft. Why, terrible? Because everyone's first drafts are terrible, even professional writers like me. That's just how it goes. If you have a perfect first draft, then that's a problem in and of itself. A discussion for another day.

The scariest moment is always just before you start. After that, things can only get better.

Stephen King

I like that every page in every book can have a gem on it. It's probably what I love most about writing—that words can be used in a way that's like a child playing in a sandpit, rearranging things, swapping them around. They're the best moments in a day of writing—when an image appears that you didn't know would be there when you started work in the morning.

Markus Zusak

When you start putting pen to paper, you see a side of your personal truth that doesn't otherwise reveal itself in conversation or thought.

Anthony Kiedis

Step 2. Circle the "gems"

Circling the "gems" is another way to say: hey, let's use what's working and discard what's not working. 

That way, you're using the most interesting parts of you writing and giving yourself room to expand upon them later. This is a gift that's easy to overlook. 

But the fact is, there's almost always something that's already working in your piece of writing and that's where the real work begins.

Step 3. Rewrite it

Yep, just like you thought. Now, we're going to rewrite the thing we were writing, in order to write what we're *actually* writing. lol. 

Seriously though, most people don't know this, but writing is mostly research and editing. That's it. 

You get good at writing and editing by reading a lot. Like, A LOT. That's the key and that's something that will help you become a better writer. 

I am always chilled and astonished by the would-be writers who ask me for advice and admit, quite blithely, that they "don't have time to read." This is like a guy starting up Mount Everest saying that he didn't have time to buy any rope or pitons.

Stephen King

You don't start out writing good stuff. You start out writing crap and thinking it's good stuff, and then gradually you get better at it. That's why I say one of the most valuable traits is persistence.

Octavia E. Butler

Step 4. Edit, edit, edit

Then edit some more.

You may think I'm joking, except I'm not. Like I said, writing well is really all about the editing. Editing for *this*, then editing for *that*, repeat. 

You may find it helpful to find "a second pair of eyes" to give your piece a once-over. Because sometimes we're too close to our own writing to do it justice.

Step 5. Just kidding, there is no step 5

Of course, there's other steps you can take. Like publishing your work in literary journals or as an ebook, or writing query letters, that sort of thing. But not everyone's at that stage. And that's okay. 

I'm flexible, so I'm willing to meet you where you're at. 

We'll collaborate on crafting your poem(s) and go from there. Fill out this brief form, so we can get in touch!

Draw the art you want to see, start the business you want to run, play the music you want to hear, write the books you want to read, build the products you want to use – do the work you want to see done.

Austin Kleon

Pricing

Craft a poem: from start to finish

Advanced

You're dedicated to your writing and would do anything to have a fully finished poem that's ready to publish in literary journals. 

Let's make it happen! Limited to two pages, 12 point font, with maximum 1.5 inch line spacing.

$1,000

Edit my poem: constructive feedback & more

Intermediate

You're a writer and you want to get better. Let's work together to edit your poem, where I'll answer your questions, give you feedback you can use to improve your writing, and add comments you can refer back to later.

$250

Start a poem: writing prompt

Beginner

Includes the personalized writing prompt with a live 30-minute Zoom session. The point of doing this live? To make time for your writing. 

Also includes a discussion of what's working in your writing prompt vs. what's not and how you might proceed with what's next. 

$75

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